Six Sentence Sunday: It’s still me (Mira’s first spanking)

I’m going to ignore this silliness about it being the last Six Sunday. Whatever. It’s not happening. For those of us who write spanking fiction, there will be a new Saturday Spanking to continue the fun. If you don’t write spanking fiction, now’s a good time to start. And/or I will be posting snippets on Sundays, so it’s not the end.

Stop sniffling. It’s not over. Now stop getting sentimental or I’ll spank you all.

This snippet (so it’s more than six sentences…it’s the last Sunday and I can break the rules if I want) shows Mira’s first “spanking”. Last week’s snippet showed her begging not to be spanked, but her tutor insisted that it was better to get the first time over with so she wouldn’t obsess. Mira got her way and then obsessed for the full week. At her next lesson, some friendly teasing turns into something more serious.

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“It’s still me,” she says softly.  “This doesn’t change how I feel about you.  Or our work together.”

“Th-thank you,” I stammer incoherently.  In answer, the pen flicks against my palms a second time.

“Don’t be afraid,” she tells me.  “You have no reason to fear.  I’m on your side.”

For the briefest moment, I wonder if being struck —but it seems too harsh a word—is too small a price to pay for receiving her seemingly limitless love. I’m almost ready to ask her to give it to me.  Almost.

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Mira thought she wanted a spanking. What she got was love.

On her own for the first time, Mira is studying abroad for her translator’s certificate. Unfortunately, the heady excitement of dance clubs, late-night parties, and endless shopping quickly distracts her from her educational goals. Mira’s advisor offers her private tutoring with a womanly touch, but the combined pressures of culture and language difference threaten Mira’s progress at school. She is unable to get her act together until she makes a discovery that horrifies and tantalizes her: in her new country, corporal punishment is a way of life. The secret to her academic success just might also fulfill her wildest, unspoken dreams.

Sexy. Seductive. Dangerous. A compelling and poignant read.

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38 thoughts on “Six Sentence Sunday: It’s still me (Mira’s first spanking)

  1. Cara Bristol January 27, 2013 at 6:23 am Reply

    Excellent character development in this story. Mira’s reaction to being disciplined shifted from horror to curiosity to desire. She went from shock to awe.

    I signed up for Saturday Spankings (the blog hop, not being spanked!).

    • Ana January 27, 2013 at 6:35 am Reply

      After your behavior yesterday, Miss Bristol, *I* signed you up for being spanked. We’ll get *you* to be shocked and awed. Hehe.

      I think we always secretly struggle with conflicting feelings when it is something we truly want.

  2. Natasha Knight January 27, 2013 at 7:04 am Reply

    I’m about half way through this one and remember that scene well. It’s different than I expected, more serious. I like it.

    I too signed up for the Saturday Spankings, thank you for the note.

    • Ana January 27, 2013 at 7:13 am Reply

      They are all my favorite scenes in different ways, but I loved this one. I am glad you like it. And yes, anyone who read The Vengeance of Mrs. Claus would reasonably be surprised that my next would be serious. :) The Way Home (in March) will be even more serious than this one. But still with some silliness, too. No stinky cheese, though. :)

  3. pao January 27, 2013 at 8:31 am Reply

    *sniffles* Oh, how I’ll miss the loosely interpreted sixes. And now there’d be nothing to remind me it’s Sunday.

    I loved this scene. The playfulness made it memorable and Mira’s reaction/feelings towards being punished changing into something different felt genuine.

    • Ana January 27, 2013 at 8:47 am Reply

      I will post some more. Don’t worry. :D

      And I love the silliness combined with the seriousness.

  4. Gem Sivad January 27, 2013 at 9:46 am Reply

    I can see her transition from aversion/reaction/almost desire. Well done!

    • Ana January 27, 2013 at 9:47 am Reply

      And the change is continuing. :)

      Thank you!

  5. Clare Davidson January 27, 2013 at 9:48 am Reply

    Interesting character progression in just a few lines. Also a very touching moment. Great 6 :)

    • Ana January 27, 2013 at 10:00 am Reply

      Thank you, Clare!

  6. Celeste Jones January 27, 2013 at 9:51 am Reply

    I thought these two were great characters and I love their interaction.

    • Ana January 27, 2013 at 10:00 am Reply

      Mira’s tutor is one of my favorite characters, ever. I am glad you like her. :)

  7. Joseph McNamara January 27, 2013 at 9:58 am Reply

    Sheer emotion, can getting (perhaps “Struck”) bring about her undivided love ? A question of love and discipline in one complex six sentences…. I own your book, now I’ve got to commit the read… Looking forward more and more with your snippets… And next weekend it will be “Happy Spanking Saturday” !

    • Ana January 27, 2013 at 10:00 am Reply

      Oh, thank you Joseph! I hope you like it!

      I was delighted to see hints of F/F on your blog today. Yay!

      And…getting “struck” can certainly have many effects.

  8. Taryn Kincaid January 27, 2013 at 10:02 am Reply

    Nice meeting you here!

    • Ana January 27, 2013 at 10:14 am Reply

      It may be the last day, but it’s not too late to meet. :)

  9. Jess Schira January 27, 2013 at 11:08 am Reply

    I like the conflict and character arc you’ve set up here. Well done!

  10. Sandra Sookoo January 27, 2013 at 11:35 am Reply

    Nicely done! :-)

  11. Laura Kaye January 27, 2013 at 12:24 pm Reply

    Great conflicting feelings!

  12. Sue January 27, 2013 at 12:35 pm Reply

    You gave me a whole new view of spanking and for that I thank you. And thank you for the great comments you leave on my blog

  13. Sue Lyndon January 27, 2013 at 12:45 pm Reply

    Love the connection these two characters have here.

    • Ana January 27, 2013 at 4:50 pm Reply

      Thank you, Sue. :) Your package is on its way.

  14. siobhanmuir January 27, 2013 at 1:17 pm Reply

    It’s not the last for me either. Not sniffling over here, Ana. Great six. I love how she recognizes she’s not ready for the spanking yet, but she’s definitely considering it. :)

    • Ana January 27, 2013 at 4:50 pm Reply

      Yup, stiff upper lips here. And yes, she is intrigued but not quite ready to take the plunge. Slowly, slowly said the spider to the fly…

  15. S. J. Maylee January 27, 2013 at 1:26 pm Reply

    There’s a tender journey in your snippet. Intriguing.
    Thank you for making this final day of SSS full of fun. It’s on these Sundays that I’ve discovered my love for spanking stories, excited for what I’ll find next Saturday.

    • Ana January 27, 2013 at 4:48 pm Reply

      Very tender indeed.

      I am *thrilled* you have come over to the dark side! It is certainly the fun side. Have you signed up for Saturday spankings?

  16. Cat January 27, 2013 at 1:52 pm Reply

    Ana, I do love this book. Mira’s reactions are so real, this reads more as a diary than a ‘story’. Anyone who hasn’t read the entire book needs to get it ASAP.

    I’m really looking forward to Mira 2!

    • Ana January 27, 2013 at 4:47 pm Reply

      Confessions of a Naughty Schoolgirl’s Secret Diary…hm…maybe that will have to be the title for the sequel! Hehe.

      I should hire you to be my PR queen.

  17. Jessica Subject January 27, 2013 at 4:31 pm Reply

    Love the “almost” there. She’s still holding on. Great excerpt! :)

    • Ana January 27, 2013 at 4:47 pm Reply

      Thank you so much. What a bittersweet day to have the last six, eh?

  18. minelle January 27, 2013 at 5:47 pm Reply

    Miss loosely interpreted rules….Now who needs spanked???
    I love Mira, her emotions are real. That conflict…wanting…not wanting…!

    Great.

    • Ana January 27, 2013 at 6:19 pm Reply

      Someone told me that you need the spanking, Minelle.

      Mira certainly is real. I love Cat’s comment that it almost feels like a diary.

  19. Donna Cummings January 27, 2013 at 8:23 pm Reply

    Intriguing six. :) And I’m chuckling over you giving spankings for those who dare to get sentimental. LOL I’m glad there will be more to read.

    • Ana January 27, 2013 at 8:28 pm Reply

      Giggle. I guess trying to be stern and authoritarian didn’t work? And yes, I will continue with or without company, but I think there will be company.

  20. Evelyn Jules January 27, 2013 at 9:50 pm Reply

    It’s not the end; it’s the start of something new! Loved this snippet, love that you shared more than six (like me!), and I’ll be back for more–spanking or otherwise! ;)

    • Ana January 27, 2013 at 9:51 pm Reply

      Looking forward to the continuation, and I’m glad that you’ll be around. What would the weekends be like without snippets, anyway? :)

  21. karen Y. bynum January 28, 2013 at 4:52 pm Reply

    Ooo, sexy 6! :D

  22. J.M. Blackman January 28, 2013 at 5:23 pm Reply

    I love the delicate tension you thread through these emotional snippets, heightens the already totally sexy moment. :) And they’re teaching moments, too, so that’s another plus.

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